I swear I'm gonna re-do this. Kinda not satisfied. SO yeah.. he's a brawler ..of some sort. xD I need very constructive crits on this one people! Help! ^^
The main concept is fine, but there are a few things that seem iffy to me. The right leg, for example, you may want to extend it further. It's in the foreground, compared to the left leg, but the way it is now, it makes his legs look uneven. The left hand also needs to be drawn differently, I think. Looking at just the hand, it looks like the character's flexing his wrists towards you, which is fine, even if it hurt me a little imitating it the pose as is, but the arm doesn't reflect that. The arm, as it is, implies a raised fist, not one pointing towards you.
Also, the skin color seems purple-y to me. I think that it would be a good idea to play with the colors, not just for the skin, but for the character's clothing and eyes as well. Even if you ultimately stay with the color choices you have made already, it may help you see the character in new, more interesting lights.
Those were the only things I can see iffy at the moment. I hope all of this is helpful in some way. I'm not necessarily the best when it comes to critiques...
dapat ata mas tapangan mo p ung mga mata nya..kc kung brawler sha dapat mukha shang mtapang,,ung malupet na astigin b?..kc prang mbait p ung dating ng mukha nya dahil maamo ung mata...hayun...accesories din kulang,,,tska bsta may kulang tlga pero un lng ang mga nkita ko...ge!
pede ba mag sugest.......subukan mong gawing v ung uper body nya tapos paliiting mo ung mata..
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brawler..
dagdagan mo sha
ng mga metal accessories?
[well.. sort of..^^x]
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Chto vasha Pol'sha!
U nashey Yekaterinih odna pizda bol'she!!
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ゆみこ
青春 すごいい ね....( ゚д゚ )
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atashi wa daisuki anata desu!!!!!
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Also, the skin color seems purple-y to me. I think that it would be a good idea to play with the colors, not just for the skin, but for the character's clothing and eyes as well. Even if you ultimately stay with the color choices you have made already, it may help you see the character in new, more interesting lights.
Those were the only things I can see iffy at the moment. I hope all of this is helpful in some way. I'm not necessarily the best when it comes to critiques...
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